Propossal for final Idea:

Our final idea is a combination of two ideas, being idea two and idea three...

We liked the concept from idea two of the hostage situation, and the idea of it being set at an abottior to get the disturbing sense for our thriller opening.
However, we also liked the concept of idea three with the strong connotations to the religious aspect of controll, obidence and defiance. And the idea that the man is a controll freak and that as he cannot controll his daughters every move, he has to kill her.

As it is sociologically proven, one in every four women will be domestically abused at some point in there lives and it is a boyfriend, partner of family member that the offence is committed by, this really hits on a sensitive subject but situation that is occuring in every day situations.

As we are mixing the two ideas together, we came to a final decision of keeping with the hostage situation of girl/women being attacked and kept away. However, in the third idea the controll freak is the dad of his daughter.

Our final idea, is there is a religious controll freak that has fallen for a young girl. The young girl has a boyfreind who she constantly argues with and the controll freak is so jealous that he cannot have her yet somebody else can who doesnt treat her half as good as he reckons he can.  He keeps a photo of her, and constantly fantasies about her until one day he sets a plan to follow her and keep her captive.